The world I chose was different of course
But the people I chose were no different at all
We clicked together we planned to gel forever.......
Met so many faces but only a few to remember and few to cherish
Friends they say are the gifts of God, Oh ! but I say they are the strings or our hearts chord.
Fortunate me I found my chords, wishing the music to go all along.
Have the beautiful memories intact, and the moments all tracked.
Knowing that its a new day I have a different world again.
But the people I chose were no different at all
We clicked together we planned to gel forever.......
Met so many faces but only a few to remember and few to cherish
Friends they say are the gifts of God, Oh ! but I say they are the strings or our hearts chord.
Fortunate me I found my chords, wishing the music to go all along.
Have the beautiful memories intact, and the moments all tracked.
Knowing that its a new day I have a different world again.
you write well...but remember one thing "if theres a possibility to remove 1 word, pls remove it" it will make the impact....less words and more expressions is the crux...let the words express them themselves...dnt do it for them... :) Blesses...and kisses.........Hola............
ReplyDeleteJust felt like adding a note..to a familiar,and endearing tune. For rhythm's sake!;) For melody's sake :)
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